First signature

What do you think? be gentle and any tips you would like to share I'd appreciate it.

 

anyone at all have any constructive criticism

 

Hi pawn! I'm really glad you decided to display your art here.

From a first look I can tell you probably wanted to emphasize the people in the center, and I really admire the concept shown in your piece. If I may make a suggestion, to further enhance your artwork, follow the Rule Of Thirds. I understand that this is your first tag-signature, and I advise that you do not add any sorts of text, as it never adds to the piece. Some additional suggestions I might make would be to use the effects outside of the focal (the place where your audience should be admiring!) to blend the focal in with the background. Overall I love how you used the various tools available to create your first signature.

I look forward to seeing more of your work , great work mate!

 

thanks for the tips and advice I'll definitely take it to heart.

 

I dont really think it has a focal point, my eyes cant really focus on a specific place. Not sure what to think of it, but not bad for your first sig. Practise more and you will get even better

 

Yeah I agree with the posters above. Its a bit crowded and not very clear. Its a little small too for a signature banner.

 

Right away I can tell its too busy, remove some of the vibrance to begin with.

 

I'm sure, From my position it looks like you took an image stretched it, then put some text on it... But If I'm wrong and you made the background yourself.. Then I'm impressed dude. My first signatures where glow text haha!