First smudge eva bb

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First smudge eva bb
  1. Unread #1 - Nov 12, 2012 at 6:22 PM
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    Started with nothing and ended up with this. The composition seems off since there isn't a whole lot to it, but any further criticism would be much appreciated :)

    Thanks!
     
  3. Unread #2 - Nov 12, 2012 at 6:39 PM
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    First smudge eva bb

    It has something that makes my eyez jeez
     
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    First smudge eva bb

    Wow, that's really impressive for a first time smudge tag. I think the way you applied the smudge brush is great and fitting, but I get the feeling there's some conflicting flow around the front of his torso and a bit below. Also as you mentioned, there is lack of composition, I always find it better to start with a smaller canvas. Overall awesome job Jiwi :)
     
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    Better then anything I could do mate!
     
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    First smudge eva bb

    Really good for firrst smudge the blending seems a bit off though and that smudge on his hair looks weird could use a little more depth but nice one!
     
  11. Unread #6 - Nov 13, 2012 at 7:08 AM
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    Thanks for the feedback so far guys :)
     
  13. Unread #7 - Nov 13, 2012 at 10:17 PM
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    Any other opinions?
     
  15. Unread #8 - Nov 13, 2012 at 10:30 PM
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    Great work as always, love the colors :)
     
  17. Unread #9 - Nov 14, 2012 at 1:15 AM
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    I love smudging but smudging alone is hardly ever effective. Try mixing it in with your usual style and it should bring many benefits.
     
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