Some more GFX I've made

This was my first piece:


Viviant and others commented that the colours were off and I made a couple mistakes. So these are some GFX I've recently made for others, would like your feedback again (improvements needed, etc.). I'd like to become better [Am still an amateur]

Youtube Intro GFX for Sebastian Vael:


Avatar made for Yankiee:


Just made this signature for Maze:


Avatar for Maze:

 

I really like my one, thanks buddy :3

 

You're definitely getting there man

For the first new piece, try to do more than throw a c4d render in and put some text on it haha. Try new things out and work on cohesive-ness!

Just as a random reference (and it's not my best work by any means), try to blend the colors and elements so it operates (to the eye) as a single piece rather than a jumble of elements stuck together:
http://i.minus.com/iW11BjGs5xqfL.png

The text also seems to be rather simple and bland. Google some styles and work on adding some pizzaz to the text

Lastly, you can see that outer edge on the TV. To help that out, throw a Normal mode, 100% black inner glow to it 2-3px thick. That should solve it an help it to blend in more.



Keep on working man. If it was easy to do, everyone would be doing it. Look up tutorials, google methods of sig-making, and experiment with it yourself. I see awesome progress!

 

they look great mate!

 

Will give this a try next time, thanks

Thank you .

 

Hmm, you are definitely progressing bud. Here is one thing to keep in mind. When adding effects in Photoshop through blending options, try to actually manipulate the settings so that it gives the piece the best look. Don't just do what I like to call a "click-in-the-box." Keep working mate!

 

Alright will keep that in mind, Thanks alot.

 

dude for you first time that is amazing, i just dislike the dark green