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Spiderman
  1. Unread #1 - Oct 24, 2012 at 1:46 PM
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    Feedback is appreciated.​
     
  3. Unread #2 - Oct 24, 2012 at 4:35 PM
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    You've blown out the entire image by over doing the lighting. You don't really see any effects because of the erroneous use of values. The text is pretty decent.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Oct 24, 2012 at 4:36 PM
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    Looks pretty solid to me. Good use of effects which draws the person looking at it into the focal. The only thing I dislike is the sudden change here: [​IMG] If I were you I would just crop that out.
     
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    I'm going to agree with Moon here. The lighting effects look pretty fun and solid. While it could use minor work like text effects (for more aesthetically pleasing results), the focal is, well, the focal and overall composition seems pretty fun and to the point. Nice work man!


    (Here's what it looks like without the bars just for a quick reference)
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  9. Unread #5 - Oct 24, 2012 at 5:16 PM
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    To the untrained (my) eye, it looks alright. Maybe just tone down the lighting though, like Nero said. It looks nice, just a little overdone. And definitely take off the borders.
     
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    Alright guys, thanks for the feedback, and i thought those bars would look nice for borders :\
     
  13. Unread #7 - Oct 26, 2012 at 1:27 PM
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    i like this, the lighting is spot on, 8/10
     
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    LOoks good PS5 ?
     
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  19. Unread #10 - Oct 28, 2012 at 12:19 PM
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    Really nice; I like the effects but as said above just tone down the lighting slightly!
     
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