Gfx work for Frostbite

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Sig for frostbite, will edit UI and Ava in later

 

Seems a bit LQ maybe its just my phone. But it is appealing. Quick question is that volibear in your avatar?

 

Ive been looking up text effects recently and the effect looks super famiilar, either way I like it, although that pentooling seems incomplete, id remove it or do a little more

 

Yessir, and yea the lighting makes some edges look a bit shifted. part of the cracky effect

 

It's too busy which makes the text hard to read. Its also dim, work on the lighting.

 

THATS WHAT IT WAS. I knew the text wasnt popping for some reason, brighten up that text and It should pop better

 

I think there is way too much going on as Moon said. Your text and effects shouldn't compete for attention. That is where good composition comes in.

 

Thanks moon, updated

 

Not much better. Your background layer is on top of your text layer, and gray isn't a good color for any of this. Go for some sort of mild color

 

It's not a signature noam, it's the UI but he requested it big for quality issues on other forums.

 

Seems a bit too LQ for me