My first Thread Design.

Let me know what you think, spent a good bit of time perfecting it. I'm a bit of a GFX nooby, but I'd like to improve

 

not bad. work a bit on your headers/text

 

Simple, but effective.

The font isn't very appealing on your banner, try changing it. I can barely read the first word. The skrill looks a bit choppy, but that doesn't really matter.

Other than that it's good.

 

Yeah I agree with 75 Def, the header isn't that great. The branding needs to be legible, the cte takes a little while for people to even comprehend imo. Basically when making professional text don't go for fancy stuff like that, go more minimal with a slight flair.

 

Hey Jordan. Umm lets see. The only thing I can instant see is that your header/banner conflicts with the professionalism implied by the body/content. Other than that it really looks nice man. Keep practicing!

 

I agree
Even if you want to keep the font try to make smooth and go with the flow

 

I also dislike your heading for this, but other than this it looks good.
Do you have an additional one with the words Offline?

 

I like seeing threads that are well in perspective of a buyer. Would choose you over others if the price is right.