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  1. Danai

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    Just finished my first graphic in a long time on photoshop. Opinions?

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    All CnC Welcome :D
     
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    To blurry, I don't like how "n" and "a" are the same color.

    4/10, fix those, 6/10.
     
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    The N is most likely more orange then the A.
    Yet, this is a pretty nice piece, it's very simple! Yet the lighting looks kinda good.
    Good job.
     
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    Thanks! I can't fix the color as i only saved the finished piece, and I merged a lot of layers before then, but the n was meant to be violet and the a was meant to be pink xD
     
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    It would be difficult to read this from a distance. It's very blurry. Try playing around with the unsharpen mask tool in Photoshop and see what kind of results you get.
     
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    Don't like the reflection, cut a little less than half of the top so it makes it look realistic.

    It's very blurry, which a name signature shouldn't be. At least without a concept.
     
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    you shouldn't follow a tutorial word for word, its pointless.

    Regardless, it looks pretty good apart from the quality.
     
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    It looks nice, however you shouldn't have the whole piece for a good reflection effect. Just the first third of it should suffice.
     
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    ^^^ And when you blur it for that particular effect, have an unblurred layer at the top to sharpen it and make sure it's legible
     
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