A wok in the park

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A wok in the park
  1. Unread #1 - Jul 22, 2012 at 5:54 PM
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    A wok in the park

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    A wok in the park

    An..interesting piece. However, I dislike the added helicopters. The one above the wok pan in particular. It seems as if that heli is behind the pan, but the size of it's size is huge.

    Also, the flare you added onto the pan looks to unnatural. Its a small flaw, but flares are eye catching - if they look off, its very noticeable.
     
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    A wok in the park

    It looks pretty good mate, as the user said above I don't really like the added helicopters in there but other than that it looks great.
     
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    A wok in the park

    Thanks for that catch on the size, don't know how I didn't notice that /facepalm

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  9. Unread #5 - Jul 22, 2012 at 6:46 PM
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    A wok in the park

    I like the lighting and the shading of the pan, but remove the helicopters. It kind of sets me off. Nice piece, it's very realistic.
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jul 23, 2012 at 1:24 AM
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    A wok in the park

    Looking better. Noticed you changed the flare up a bit too.
     
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