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3rd Signature Attempt - Vector

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  1. Myrtile

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    Went for more of a vector like signature attempt this time, so please CnC >_<
     
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    Seems too basic in my opinion. A few random circles around a render which has been duplicated and a basic background. Is the lighting on the sig yours though? If so the light source itself is good, but I'd like to see some better shadows
     
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    Yeah I get what your saying and shall take into consideration and yes the lighting in the signature was done by me, thanks. :)
     
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    The simplicity is what i like about it. :D so keep going like this m8

    What i'd have done is bledning in more of the circles tho. idk how to express what i mean :/
     
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    I like it, but I feel that you should do more. Signatures of this style usually have a lot more going on in them, like lines, multiple colors, just lots of stuff in general, but not so many that it looks spammed and random
     
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    hm.. maybe u could add some lighting effects or maybe even some 3d stuff:/ looks like a bit too simple
     
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    nice graphics could u enhance one of mine
     
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    Simplicity is bliss. Walk into any modern art museum and look around. Circles everywhere. ((Personally I think its some 21st century theme))

    I do like the simplicity, but maybe go a little deeper and add a 3 dimension effect. By this I mean maybe extend a circle out a bit (cover part of the screen/render?), use a Gaussian blur on it and make it look like a photo focused in on your Flareon Then do the same with a circle farther back, just make it have that focused feel!

    Try it!

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    To me all it really needs is a little depth. Maybe a shadow on the focal? Just mess around with it. Other than that it looks nicee =]
     
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    I like the flow, and you did a good job with the colors in this. The part that makes a vector tag awesome is the composition and this is where you are lacking. You should consider taking a look at the rules of thirds and the golden ratio to learn how to position your effects and focal.
     
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    Absolutely love the simplicity of this! I think the colours and the placement of the lighting work really well in this. Although like the others said, it needs that little more touch of depth in it.
     
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    Beautifull *.* I cant do it :( hahaha
     
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    This. The intended focal was obvious however my eyes were directed elsewhere.
     
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    Honestly, I like it a lot, especially since it's only your third. Though, one thing I would suggest is turning down the light source just a tad.
     
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    Its simple but still looks good, nice job.
     
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