need opinions on my rapping?

if the video doesnt work heres the direct link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwWeMDoBY1I&feature=plcp

well we made this in about 7 minutes, the longest part was waiting for it to upload. anyways, could i get some positive or negative feedback on this? im the main guy rapping

 

This is a joke right? You aren't rapping at all. You're just talking. Not funny either.

 

i was rapping?

 

Not really. You were whispering most of the time. I really doubt you're serious considering it's about rape and the 2nd guy kept laughing lol. If you are though, then you should definitely quit now.

 

Lmfao

 

Get a new mic, seems like you are rapping into a crappy one.

 

I find it hard to masturbate too..

 

um ya...i was using a turtle beach headset haha. and an old one at that.
but in all honesty, we have written a runescape rap, and were going over to my friends house this weekend to record it. he has all kinds of recording goodies, and i think were gonna do it to this same track. the only reason that this happened is because we started recording, it sounded like crap, and i just freestyle...talked

 

stop doing it

 

i still feel like this is a solid song

 

Don't make raps about RuneScape... You don't want to make rap worse than it is already.

 

There is nothing solid about this video... I don't listen to much rap, but I do know decent rap when I hear it and this was a joke.

 

Well.. You got a nice voice, Get a good mic and put some time into the lyrics. I would love to listen to you again if you try to get better.

 

All Yall Niggas Just Wait, Im Bout To Drop The Runescape Rap Dis Weekend. Yall Gon Be Amaz3d

 

Lol you gotta effing kiddin with me. This is worse than drake. Wow. This is not even rapping it is more talking phone-sex with some random chick.

 

ya, that was the point. this is the kinda song you make love too, for hours at a time

 

If you enjoy rapping keep doing it, but rememeber it does not sound the best. I support you if you love what you do.

 

lawl.....

 

This is retarded. Get the mic out of your mouth, first of all. Rap sucks, and so does whatever this is. It's not funny.

 

Yeah, less whispering