DMX Tag

First attempt at a tag like this, CnC appreciated.

 

Decent flow atleast, although the text is hard to make out, and the render doesn't really pop-out.

The image is also very empty, whereas it is a decent sizedd canvas

 

Thanks for the input.

 

Oversharpened, seems to be a fair bit of noise

 

I sharpened it once, Also I believe the 'noise' is from a texture I overlayed on the image.

 

One too many :nuts:

 

- lq background (makes it look like some lq grain)
- oversharpened as mentioned earlier
- monotone
- boring compo
- not so great execution
- where are the FX?
+ placement

If you want to learn how to pr0 smudge, watch these (they're in Italian, mind, but he's the godfather of smudge):

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M7RvFKe6Bxw


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQfF8Dm8zVc