Another attempt at rebranding

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Another attempt at rebranding
  1. Unread #1 - Mar 29, 2012 at 3:48 PM
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    Another attempt at rebranding

    Just spent another 2 minutes (as always) attempting to rebrand (again) my web & graphics company. So far, I have come up with a very basic concept and produced it. Before we start, I'd just like to say I came up with this in maths while designing a Pythag poster.

    White version for Sythe:

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    Blue version for website:

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    Changed the white version a little: (N is now cut out and text is sythe color)

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    I'm in the middle of designing a mascot; may take a while though, it's approaching summer and that means a bit of sun!

    Feedback fully welcome :)
     
  3. Unread #2 - Mar 29, 2012 at 6:24 PM
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    Another attempt at rebranding

    Fix the kerning of the logotype - look how fat and close together the 'hon' looks in comparison to 'pyt', it just doesn't fit nicely.
    It's also far too angular in general for the fonts you're using - look at how squarish the general shape is and how curved the little font is.
    I like the concept of the logo, but it could be far more stylish, better executed and web 2.0
     
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    Another attempt at rebranding

    Thanks for your feedback!
    I'll try fixing up the letter spacing :)
    As for the font, I could round off the top left of the P and the bottom left of the N if that would do?
    I'll get on it soon!
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    Another attempt at rebranding

    Instead of making it the Sythe colour, you could just make it transparent and save it as .PNG. As for the logo itself, I really like it. It's sort of "abstract" yet you can easily read what it says.
     
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    Another attempt at rebranding

    Thanks for the feedback! :)

    Sorry I've been away for so long, will get more active again!
     
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    Another attempt at rebranding

    Font choice of web and graphics could be changed, and I feel the actual main text is a little too thick. It needs some more details, perhaps some 1 pixel black lines to follow the edges of the text (like in the middle of the text).
     
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