Beginner Graphics Designer Gallery- please offer advice :)

Hi I'm a beginner to creating graphics. I'm just doing it for fun as it's something I'd like to get better at


UPDATED: Here is my first Youtube layout

The picture is a photograph I took about 8 months ago








Here is my first assassins creed wallpaper

Below is a sig I made for someone

And here is a logo i made



I also made my own avatar and signature

thanks!

 

The purple doesn't fit with the main character, and the brushes are too diverse... The physics theme also doesn't go with the picture, but the lightning does. Other than that, it looks good. I think adding some texture to the background would look good, and a color change would be better. Lol, I don't know of you were asking for opinions, but oh well. >.<

 

That's really helpful I've saved your comment to follow next time I get 30minutes to sit down and try another

thankyou very much ^_^

 

Aww, no problem haha glad I could help!

 

So sick how long'd that take?

 

thanks for your feedback

about 30 minutes because i kept changing my mind ^_^

 

Lol you love purple,,

The wallpaper is okay i guess,, i don't like the lightning in the background,, that doesn't fit the style, and theres also to much going on,, you want your focal to be ezio and not the effects surrounding him,, and also the composition is not good,, try using "the rule of thirds" search it on google and read on how to use it on your pieces

Good job! ,, keep it up!

 

thanks for the advice and thanks for the rule of thirds info!

 

The background is nice but the light streaks are a little random, you could make them more even on both sides. Perhaps add some darkness or shadows to the edges as well for some depth.

The signature is fairly ordinary, and I can't comment on much.

The logo is nice, and has good colours and light on the text. Only thing you could change is the lightning behind the "A" which goes against the flow of the other effects.

 

thankyou very much I will try my best to apply those improvements ^_^

 

You should also follow the rule of thirds, it would make your pieces much more dynamic.

 

I've just learnt what it is thanks! I can't believe how much difference it will make once I get used to it ^_^

 

I love the wallpaper, and the renders in general, but your use of text needs to be improved quite a bit.

Keep up the good work though

 

I like the wallpaper. You did it very well.

 

Thankyou both for your feedback!

I agree I need to improve on my text ^_^

I'll practice some more work and maybe update this thread in the future

 

bump. youtube layout added ^_^

 

very excellent assasins creed wallpaper! very excited to see those all the time.

 

thankyou :')