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  1. Unread #1 - Feb 24, 2012 at 6:55 PM
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    I need to work on the colours a little but made this last night.
     
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    Sweet tag, but I feel that you could do without an entire 1/3rd of the right side and some of the negative space. It draws attention away from the focal. I also think that there is a distinct lack of flow and that the lighting isn't really there. While there is the hint of lighting I don't think it really follows through all the way. The render doesn't really blend in well because of the bounced light on the opposite side of his face. I hope these critiques help bro. Keep it up.

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    The light on his face is like a cream color but the light from the light source is blue.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Feb 24, 2012 at 7:11 PM
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    Nice,, But there are numerous things you could improve

    +Great effects
    +Good lighting
    +Contrast is very good
    +Depth

    -Colors (you mentioned this yourself. You could maybe choose different colors, i personally don't like all the blue in this sig, its to much

    Also,, I can see some green and purple c4d,, delete this,, it messes up the sig in my opinion

    and i don't know if this is my screen or something you did,, but the dark parts almost looks brownish/red,, i would love to see this in black

    -Size, In my opinion the sig is to wide.. you could shorten this a little bit, because the c4d on the right draws to much attention away from the focal

    -Originality, It doesn't have that wow-factor.. I would love to see some new FX

    Yea,, sorry if i have been a bit harsh with the CnC,, but better to be honest than lie and say there is nothing wrong with it

    I would love to see a V2!

    ps. DEXTER ROCKS!,, can't wait for season 7 and 8!
     
  7. Unread #4 - Feb 24, 2012 at 8:33 PM
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    Cheers guys, I may do a complete overhaul on it then. It's been a while since I've tagged (again) so I need a few more misses before I get a hit :p
     
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