#New Tag

Haven't made a tag in a looooong time, trying to get back into it. Compliments/CnC appreciated

v1



v2


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Whats behind MC?

 

Some sort of c4d.

 

It needs work because right now it kind of feels like you just pasted MC over a smudged spacestock and added a couple of filters. It has too much contrast and there is really little depth and flow. It needs more flow and just general composition work.

 

Thanks emperor, I took into consideration what you said. Is this any better?

 

It still has most of the same issues as the last one. Color issues, contrast issues, and flow issues. Your lighting should be more gradual and less harsh and you should work on making your light look more natural over the piece.

 

Thanks for the advice, I'll try to incorporate those aspects more in my future tags.