hi. i. rap.

Lovin the delivery reminds me of Okwerdz from grindtime.

 

I like it man, keep it up. I'm just starting out too.. I'm not that great in my own opinion, but it's what I like to do, and I don't exactly have a good mic. I'm using the one that's built into my lap top.. My Animation teacher will be letting me and my friend use his studio though, so that's a plus. But anyway, I like your flow, keep it up.

 

I really liked it; the lyrics were quite funny - I'm not sure if that's good or bad. Here's some improvement points:

- Cut the intro down a bit, goes on too long in my opinion.
- Increase the tempo at some point in the song.
- Decide whether you want the lyrics to be comical or serious.

Great effort though, fantastic rap.

 

You got a unique voice man you can def make something outta this and agree with what was said earlier I also like that this is different and not commercial keep it up!

 

Not bad man , you're pretty good !

 

Thanks everyone!