A non c4d tag

Revisiting my old smudging ways

 

Dig the colors and the flow but it is flat. The sphere on the far left is just kind of there and it doesn't really add anything, which makes it look awkward in the compo. I also think the focal needs blended a little better, maybe a wispy smudge across her body.

 

Thanks, I'll probably clean it up and update shortly.

 

is that thirteen from house?

flow is sick so are the colours

composition is also great with the exception of what nero mentioned

face is kinda overcontrasted

i dont like how the black stuff to the left(on the canvas) of her face just stops abruptly it interferes with the flow slightly

 

Nah don't think it's Thirteen, just a random stock I had lying around.

Thanks for the comments though!

 

+flow
+placement
+colour palette
-really weird fucking shoulder smudge (make her look like the disfigured person from 300)
-skin tone different because of light on her left shoulder
-as nero said, the spheres don't really help, try a soft brush within a circle selection, not an erased centre (since it looks more 3d and shit)
-more effects needed, looks a little like a wip

>> use an art nouveau c4d or texture/pattern, similar to the pattern on her bra (really good chance to use them which usually don't get used)
>> use some effects with pink tones, similar to her lips
>> grainy effect isn't really helping, it just creates an oversharpened look when she as a render/stock is quite smooth and glossy. It also makes her boob look scratched up and having a rash of some sort.

Overall sexy though

 

nice work

 

i don't know much about GFX, but the shoulders look weird ;s