[Speed Art][C&C]Prototype Signature

The title says it all, it's a 'speed art' video I made, while making a signature for another forum.

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Here is the final product:

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So let me know what you think!

(*NOTE*: To view the video full screen/HD, you have to go to the actual youtube page of the video)

 

Well the text isn't good, and there is no depth in the piece. Either the render is LQ or you have oversharpened the claw thing too much; it also needs a lot of work on the color and effects because right now it just kind of looks like some smudging and soft brushing.

 

Thanks mate, I didn't even notice the amount of focus on the blade! As for the text, I know :/ I've never been any good when it comes to typography, so that's something I have to work on. Thanks for the input!

 

I agree with Nero, it needs much better depth and lighting. Some more effects would also be nice, but ensure the flow stays consistent.