[MM] Awakenlng pk Commentary #2 (pure pking)

Hey guys, firstly I wanna thank you all for watching the first episode, I got a lot of advice on what I should do, and not do.

I did try and make this one a little more entertaining (speaking wise) so let me know if you preferred it to the first one or if I should just stfu.

The kills again aren't exactly outstanding so I do apologise in that respect.

Once I get my new mic I'll start doing some more.

Thanks again for watching.

Awake|Marty



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uep8KkirYfU

 

Not bad although you should combo DDS with maul you should get some pretty good kills

 

fixed for you

EDIT: Watched the video and I have to say that the commentary sucks. It's mostly you saying stuff like "fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck". You could edit out some of the long drawn out boring parts or the fights where you die, because honestly, If I wanted to watch someone die I would just go PK. Overall this video isn't that bad for being your 2nd episodes but please try to make the commentary more informative or at least less swearing.