New tag, CnC please!

Took me ~ an hour.

Comment with compliments/criticism, whatever!

 

Looks goodI don't like the text though.

 

It's so sexy, though the text on the right makes it look idiotic.

SEXY THO!

 

It's pretty good! Tho, some details on it makes me cry..
The stock is oversharpened, definitely, also: the white edges are incredibly DISTURBING and you DEFINITELY want to get rid of them.
Now, the right side of the tag is a tad too empty, might want to take a look at that, too.
I see what you tried to do with the text, have it zelda-styled, but it doesn't really fit the signature at all, so take your time, sit down and try to get it match nicely in the tag.

 

That looks sick.. I wish i was that good