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  1. ~XS

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    I like it.

    Constructive Criticism and 0/10 please.
     
    ~XS, May 16, 2009
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    It isn't bad at all, I like what you were approaching here. However, the brushing color should have been changed to meet the Optimus Prime's tone. The text, I'm not a fan of though.
     
    LightningIIIX, May 17, 2009
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    I'm not enjoying the smudging much in this one, but as always, your pentooling is superb.
     
    Verts, May 17, 2009
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    I don't like the grungy smudging.
     
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    Not my style, but you did a good job.
    7/10.
     
    OneLove, May 20, 2009
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    very shit
     
    kleborp, May 20, 2009
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    I like the smudging. Except on the text :(.
    Take the XS off, it looks stupid.
     
    Pshynosis, May 20, 2009
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    thats hellllaa sexy man gj what smudg brush nd settings u use?
     
    ChamilliTarY, May 20, 2009
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    Flow's nice, though there's not really clear lighting, and the smudge on the right hand side is too out of place, and gathers attention. Try to subtle it out a bit, lower opacity, different alyer style or blur.

    There's too much negative space on the left as well, you could try to put XS there to even it out.
     
    T R 1 B A L, May 20, 2009
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    second that opinion ^_^ 8/10
     
    freaking pure, May 20, 2009
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