omg need help

ok so iu wrote a new black metal - dethmetal song called assisting your suicide

heres a part

(growl) doctor kavorkian asisting your suicide pull the plug by consen


i need something brutal for the nexrt after thatt

 

Hmm, suicide...ewww...it sounds emo..ish but keep up the good work.

 

It'd help if you actually used proper grammar...But seriously dude, if you can't write lyrics for black metal or death metal, you should either get educated, or just quit.

 

Suck MY BALLLLLLLS?

Idk ... just trying to halp