nsotw entry 5

c&c

 

OK, there is too much black on the right i think, if you just move the crystal a bit more to the right, it will be fine

I dont like the pink line in the picture, but thats just my opinion

An overall: 8/10

Greetz,
Zeboss

 

hmm i guess ur right, i think i might make line thinner mand just redo all

 

and maybe a lighter pink color

 

The image is a bit too sharp and the pen tooling is to obvious, should be thinner and more flowing.