After awhile of kickin Ryan's ass in some raps , I'm Back. I still <3 u Ryan So heres the new lyrics, btw if anyone has any beats hit me up I wanan make a song. I try to reach out but I can’t reach Trapped in this jungle w/ mad beasts And this lion will attack to fight But a snake just attacks to eat so he attacks the weak And so I’m writing in this candle light hoping my words will attack the streets like I was packing heat Like a box of matches We been set up like them boxing matches I box u bastards and box u out Till my job is done u can’t clock me out I came this far can’t stop me now Oh, shit – hear the sounds of the cops around So quick to run from the cops Guns getting cocked When ur punch lines ain’t punching the clock And ur son’s crying cuz hes hungry u got No funds in ur pockets – u hunt til u drop Cuz when the sky is falling where do u run? U runnin outta luck, runnin outta time, and runnin outta breath in ur lung Most of yall just talk about without walking Catch me walk around without talking Smoke a pound without coughin Put u all in the ground without coffins Cuz u walking on thin ice Live life on the border – u slip, then u fallin so think twice Thru these wars how we live life Cuz we used to the darkness and walking the thin lines But I carry these torches Careful cuz various vultures surface as Im digging up my buried emotions It hurts us when these kids just stare at us hopeless But I’m here and I’m focused Homey, hold ya pistols They don’t give a fuck about your social issues Ya boys forget u All they gotta do is pick up the phone and let em know they miss u But they don’t make the call like a slow official don’t blow the whistle Same homeboys that u name when u pray Left u in the trenches taking grenades Revenge is waitin’ they’ll pay Changin’ their face like the moon when u face ‘em one day I’m just tryna take u away from the pain Erasin’ the hate in your veins and so I say Rate/Hate
I think you can do better also. To me, this sort of looks like you took out some parts of the best rappers best songs and just fit it in somewhere. Don't have the time to actually look into to it, though.
me taking other lyrics? no man I'm not gay. I actually pick a pen and write shit down first then put into my comp. Writing raps is just a hobbie for me it's not a form of getting famous.
Aaah, I like, I like. Very heartfelt. Don't let the hate get to you, they just don't like it because they don't understand, they're to busy voting on their favorite bands. LOL. Much love though.
