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My first Thread Design.

Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by CoraTheExplorer, Sep 16, 2012.

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  1. CoraTheExplorer

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    My first Thread Design.
    Let me know what you think, spent a good bit of time perfecting it. I'm a bit of a GFX nooby, but I'd like to improve :)


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    CoraTheExplorer, Sep 16, 2012
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    My first Thread Design.
    not bad. work a bit on your headers/text
     
    Lvl 75 Def, Sep 16, 2012
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    My first Thread Design.
    Simple, but effective.

    The font isn't very appealing on your banner, try changing it. I can barely read the first word. The skrill looks a bit choppy, but that doesn't really matter.

    Other than that it's good.
     
    BGlave, Sep 16, 2012
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    My first Thread Design.
    Yeah I agree with 75 Def, the header isn't that great. The branding needs to be legible, the cte takes a little while for people to even comprehend imo. Basically when making professional text don't go for fancy stuff like that, go more minimal with a slight flair.
     
    Jack, Sep 16, 2012
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  5. MoonGlare

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    Hey Jordan. Umm lets see. The only thing I can instant see is that your header/banner conflicts with the professionalism implied by the body/content. Other than that it really looks nice man. Keep practicing!
     
    MoonGlare, Sep 16, 2012
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    My first Thread Design.
    I agree
    Even if you want to keep the font try to make smooth and go with the flow
     
    fez..., Sep 16, 2012
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    My first Thread Design.
    I also dislike your heading for this, but other than this it looks good.
    Do you have an additional one with the words Offline?
     
    Broken, Sep 17, 2012
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    My first Thread Design.
    I like seeing threads that are well in perspective of a buyer. Would choose you over others if the price is right.
     
    BrawckX, Sep 18, 2012
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