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My first rap

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  1. madhacker14

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    My first rap

    I really dislike rap, unless I end up making it myself. I use to enjoy it when I was younger, and I still can bare the sound of older artists from the 90's. So I don't really know how to make one too well. This one is a faster pace, not lightning speed, but I guess you can find its pace yourself. I kinda based this on my mom, if you couldn't tell.




    Sometimes I like to sit and think,
    about the times I watched her drink,
    About the times I grabbed her booze and flushed them down the sink,
    Thinkin thats the only link
    She'd go to bars and leave us home,
    She'd be drinkin', I was stoned,
    hopein' I could get a sober loan

    fuck this anyway, cause I'd rather be alone,

    Why jesus why must I be the one!?,
    to raise my brother like a son,
    I'd blow you all away, if i had a fucking gun,
    I pray the world to end as I look upon the sun.

    wishing I could turn the clock away,
    and bring it to a better day,
    when you kissed my cheek and say
    that we'd never be far away

    Sure I was only five and couldn't compromise,
    That what you said could be a lie,
    That you'd swat my feelings like a fly,
    be a drunk and come home with every motherfucking guy.
     
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    My first rap

    Fresh, the flow is hot too. People my not think so by just simply reading it, but if you figure it out, sounds hot. Simple and Real.
     
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    You got some talent!
     
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    That's some crazy shit.

    11/10 :eek:
     
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    That's decent :p Did that really happen?
     
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    I like the 3rd verse a lot
     
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