My first quick freestyle...

Wassup Sythe world, my name is Gonjabi AKA Darkwin i signed up on this forum long ago so i don't go by that name for awhile. Anyways here's a quick freestyle nothing major just messing around, im hoping to improve my flow and mixing skills very soon!!

Thanks for checking me out!!


If it doesn't load heres the direct link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uq0YWosTdBk

 

You actually sounded very professional, and the lyrics weren't bad either. Do you have any tips to freestyling? And rapping in general?

 

I have embeded the video for everyone



The rap itself was ok, but there wasn't any chorus (I'm guessing that's because it was only short?).

 

Solid beat man. Flows pretty smooth.

 

Awesome. What did you use to record it.

 

NY style beat, consistent flow, I like it. Make more, I'm sure we'd like to hear them.

 

it was done in a studio. i can tell by the quality of it.

 

I've done numerous songs one of them being "1337 Haxxor" it was suppose to be a comedy track etc. but somehow it landed on iTunes xD
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ieJtn73e1w&feature=results_main&playnext=1&list=PL3E717AA0C34CA111

Thanks everyone for the constructive feedback!

@Egu all i can say about 'Freestyling' is find your own flow what you think you believe best fits you, be creative with words and metaphors/similies try doing something different. Im no expert so thats just my POV.

@yonkers & Magic Arrow i just used Mixcraft v5 and Waves Diamond Bundle for FX.

Thanks again!! Enjoy...

 

Very cool, great quality recording and good rhymes. Loving your 1337 haxor one too, hope you've made some nice dough from that on itunes :3

 

Love it, great flow. Awsome beat too btw