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My Anthem

Discussion in 'Music' started by 1stDiv Winger, Mar 5, 2009.

  1. 1stDiv Winger

    1stDiv Winger Member

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    My Anthem

    This is the anthem.

    Well this is my anthem
    and i speak it true
    these verses and rhymes
    hit you outta the blue

    two times the man that i was before
    a new man for the girls to adore
    i'm feeling incredible
    this verse is ungettable

    I'll keep on doing
    what i intend to do
    cuz i'm the new

    one of the only few

    to do what the fuck
    that i want do.

    don't question me
    i've got no answer
    only to run you over
    with my fully blown lancer

    i'm only doing whats got to be done
    i'll fuck--ing take on anyone.

    you wanna gaze
    you wanna praise
    but all you little
    bitches always smoking that purple haze.

    this is my anthem and i speak it true
    these verses and ryhmes
    hit you outta the blue

    take this from a little g

    who'll bust you a rhyme
    from land to sea

    this was incredible
    this was ungettable

    this anthem will truly be
    unforgettable.




    Haha, was just for fun, Criticize all you want, first lyrics i've ever made for a rap.
     
  2. raange pur3

    raange pur3 Apprentice

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    that was pretty good
    nice job
     
  3. Sorry Im F2P

    Sorry Im F2P Grand Master

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    work on flow its all random really cudnt rap that at a steady pace or to any hiphop / grime beat really. try addin more words in to the shorter bits or removin some to make it more even
     
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