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Since I don't play Xbox anymore and I have a love for Gears Of War. I decided to make this. It's been a while..

Oh and because Gears of War 3 came out. It's in my sig.

 

nice 1,but i can't really see the text.

 

Thanks but the text is meant to be like that.

 

ok where to start.

focal in the middle is not good (study rule of thirds)

grungy effect looks tacky

weak flow

remove border

the focal is basically his right shoulder because it is on a powerpoint (rule of thirds)

no depth as the foreground and background are the same sharpness.

you should emphasize the light from his shoulders instead of behind him

not much going on, add more effects, maybe a c4d or some smudging

text is pretty bad, study text theory.


basically, read up on theory, read tutorials, watch shit on youtube, fit effects around the render/stock not the other way around.


also add more colour

 

Thank you, sir.

I don't think I get better as I go along tbh. I think get better when I try new things, Which I haven't done.