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  1. Arya

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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    Read it emotionless-ly. (That way, you find the right rhythm.)

    Blind is this false sense of hope,
    A withered dream that would not show.
    But on the other side of it,
    A forgotten love that could not grow.
    Either way,
    On either path,
    Inevitably,
    I'll lose the game.
    Preparing these garments,
    Lies and truths,
    The cloaks of which should hide my shame.
     
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    its good. :) write another and post pls
     
    johnty15, Dec 19, 2009
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    Liked it. Id rate it a 6/10
     
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    It was okay.. Pretty average stuff. 5.5/10.

    On second though, I really like

    Preparing these garments,
    Lies and truths,
    The cloaks of which should hide my shame.

    so 7/10.
     
    JIM TIM JOHN, Dec 19, 2009
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    I would rate it probably a 6/10.


    P.S. Was the reference to "THE GAME", intentional?
     
    jdwk 7, Dec 28, 2009
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    not bad. i like more rhyming though
     
    loving_spec, Feb 4, 2010
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    hello guys ...


    its really nice post....


    i just liked it....


    thanks....
     
    basudec1509, Feb 10, 2010
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