Can you smell the bodies burning Flesh and blood my stomachs turning Death to all on crucifix Take me to my endless bliss Killing all just for fun The frightened creatures try to run Death to all the little kitties Chop them into itty bitties Horror stories come to life Infections from a rusty knife This cringing pain is so surreal It questions all I know is real All I see is blood and rain End this nightmare soothe my pain As I wait for nearing death I lay upon my bed of rest Death draws near his face obscene And says to me it's all a dream. Please rate 1-10. Thank you
I read it. What is it about, other than just people dying? Is there a deeper meaning? Also, please reply to my thread too!
Ah. I see. That's pretty much what it seems like. This would make a good screamo/emo/demonic type song.
Pretty good but on the part "This cringing pain is so surreal It questions all I know is real " Seems like you're trying too hard just an idea but I'd change it from that to "This cringing pain is so surreal it questions all I know and feel"
Vampire Cat: Glistening fangs and gleaming claws, Teeth that pierce and jaws like saws, Its blood red eyes that pierce the moon, My fate is awaiting it will be here soon. ___________________________ Keyring Birthday Gifts
