Finding my Way

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v2:
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v4:

C&C please

 

jay chou <3

 

right besides that. what do u think guys?

 

the coloured one looks cool. some good text and whola! efeects are nice too

 

V1 deffininatley.

TonExE, You are probably one of the most expressionistic GfX artists I have seen on this forums. I teh <harts3 your work

10/10

 

Ewww.. Blurry, crap lighting... Not very much flow. Um.. 4/10

 

wtf u smokin.. its amazing 9/10 i really do love ur work

 

I say different. Its pretty good but its not that good to the point where you can rate it a 9/10 or 10/10. I would rate this a 7.5/10. There isn't lighting on it. I'm sure if there was more lighting on it then it would be a kick ass sig. Other than that I would say its decent.

 

yeah lighting is messes up, but what dude said wtf there is alot of flow in this and they all work together also the smudging i did alot like. im gonna add a light source etc

 

added version 3 and 4

 

i'm not liking this at all, the colors are all spazzo in the first one, which really brings it down, and the flow looks like it's been created with c4ds :S

the flow is there, but it isn't consistant with itself, and because of this, doesn't fit the render.

The only one i'd have to say is decent out of them is the last one.

EDIT: Just noticed the lighting.. well. lack of there-of :S

 

I like the edit 3.. better than the 1st one.. more colours made it look more alive

 

Ur a master Gfxer!