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  1. Bbri06

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    Yes I know the text sucks.
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    Now that i look at it the wireframe does not fit in the tiniest bit....
     
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    very nice work yea text sucked but overall 8/10
     
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    nice one man
     
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    look nice i liek it
     
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    if you make the text color other than white ill give you a 9/10 :p
     
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    Thank you all but I would really appreciate if you gave me some advice instead of just saying you like it (excluding you:latin king).
     
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    7/10..the colours could of been abit better
     
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    I like it in black&white.
     
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    DEPTH! use blur tool m8.
     
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    I'm not going to blur any part of it..
     
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    7/10 Blame the text :p
     
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    the text isnt that bad, it suits the background, but not the render,
    the back ground is pefect for that render-
    render does not need to be blurred because of the metalics on both of the characters, metal+blur=bad


    my advice is to take the rectangular grid in the background and fade it some more
     
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    Thats SICKKKK 7.6/10
     
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    text sucked yes. looks good but try to use the burn and dodge tool in oyur work mostly at blan and white pieces to create more depth
     
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    7/10 ur name ruined it all :D lol
     
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    I am not fond of it too much... those random whiteish things, they look weird and they do not fit in really, the BG was chosen wisely tho and fits with the render so that's nice, just add effects that dont look weird but good, we know you can do it bro.
     
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    I LOVE the wireframes, but yerr. Text needs brushing up on..
     
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