Doom Star

Sorry about the third thread. I didn't think I would do 3 pieces today. Moh if you want to combine the threads that is cool.

 

I liked how you combined Trons lighting effect with Vador. It's a very unique design. The one and only thing that bothers me is the c4d. It doesn't seem to blend correctly with the piece. I don't know if it's the color or the placement or the overall shape itself. It just looks a little off. Honestly other than that it looks great.

 

I think it is probably the bubble effects I used. Looking at them now I hate the way they look. Might update with a v2 tomorrow minus the bubble stocks.

Also, I didn't do the render. Sorry to disappoint you. I just thought it was really BA looking.

 

If the render would blend more in it would look better. Concept is great tho

 

i feel like the piece is lack depth and the composition is messy.

i would also like to maybe see a bit more colour and some tweaking of the brightness/contrast/exposure etc

 

also its over sharpened