Hmmm, the synth is very repetitive, don't get me wrong I listen to 2 hour long trance mixes it's just that the kick and synth are the same pretty much through the entire song and it doesn't really flow with the original track. I think it's mainly the difference in quality between the original and his remix that makes it feel a little uncomfortable. I don't mean to be over critical, I think it's a step in the right direction it just needs to be worked on and needs to be approached from a different perspective in my opinion