Here's the second beat I've ever made. I kind of like this, and I think it would be easy to transition it into a new song. http://boomp3.com/listen/c16g09k6l_w/beat-mix2
I think your first one was better. But you're kind of making random noises. Listen to some instrumentals and cheat a little
Just doesn't have the flowing feel. What kind of style are you going for? You are working a common time with 120 bpm I think