Magic..

Used abit of pen tooling its not great but its a start
The usual CnC please..

 

Put your render under the border and smudge the sides in. I think the render is a bit too large as well.

 

Edited the render but im not sure what you mean by smudging the sides in..
Is it any better?

 

I havn't seen the first sig, but atm it seems good.
The bg is a little plain, but it seems to fit in. The text is also pretty good

 

Thanks, the first sig is where the render came out of the sig a little bit.. Pretty shit so i changed it. Thanks for the feedback

 

Any other thoughts?

 

It looks better now that you've re=placed the render. When I say smudge the sides in, I mean you should grab a the smudge tool on a soft brush, play with the brush settings and smudge the sides of the render with nice flow on about 40% strength.

 

Ahh, i see what you mean, yeah ill do that when i get back on my other computer. Thanks for the CnC

 

Thats nice, i like. I love the colours in the background. Well done!

 

Thanks! Probs my best or joint best piece tbh but i dont know.. Thanks anyway

 

I personally thing the text is still slightly dominant.

Its not a problem, Just an observation.