Sotw #11.

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Sotw #11.
  1. Unread #1 - Nov 6, 2008 at 4:50 PM
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    Sotw #11.

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    Sotw #11.

    It seems to me like you missed making the whole atmosphere, and focused on the troposphere. It's not bad, just feels like it's missing something in that area.
     
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    Sotw #11.

    You should do something where the planet ends and it shows space.
    Nice idea though
     
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    Sotw #11.

    Text needs work, it´s all blurry.
     
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    Sotw #11.

    Thanks for the feedback. ;)
     
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