Viznary Logo

So I'm working on a logo for an up and coming eSports graphic design company, looking for some input on the logo so far:








V2: Most Likely Final





Dank Fire:

 

Solid work so far.
The letter R doesn't really fit with the rest of the letters due to te curves it has.
I don't know about the dot on the I either.

 

Seems like the consistency in the logo is off as several letters don't seem to be anywhere near the same type face. The i is somewhat continued in the A but that style looks out of place with the rest of the type, the R is completely out of place also.

 

Yeah, believe it or not it's all the same typeface. Definitely still a WIP, will post updates tomorrow.

 

Are the only customisations you've made the reduced kerning and the i & A then?

 

Well we adjusted the overall height and some smaller sizing adjustments with some letters. Overall we want to maintain a clean and professional look. OP updated.

 

Still looks like you need to adjust some kerning between the NAR.

 

Looks way better now.

The pink part should be extended base of the I, and the orange part should be whitespace.
After you do that the dot on the I should look alot less out of space

 

R and Y looked like they walked into the wrong neighbourhood

 

+1 @Dr Phantom