Couple New sigs

Heres version 1 of my assassins creed one


version 2


Heres a NAS one that i made
i added something to the back ground that i didnt want but it enmded up alright


please tell me what you think =]

 

Hm..
On the Assasins creed ones, I prefer the second one. The game is great, the signature is okay. You might consider moving the render down a little bit, looks like he got cut in half. (Could you link to the render?)

The Nas signature is just too simple. Needs alot more work.

-Overall 4/10.

 

heres the original render
i wish i did have a full body on that on, but i still think its not bad
any comment on the text? or think i did a good job o both with text
ill make a new version or the NAS one maybe ad some brushing or filters

 

Thanks.

I could tell you didn't have the full render, but it still looked like your character had been cut in half, instead of the picture just missing his legs. The Nas text, I can't really say anything about it, because it isn't really a picture. Though- On the Assasins Creed signature, I don't like where the text is placed, or how it is placed. I think it'd look better somewhere on the right side, not as big, and in one big line like..
Assasins creed

Not - Assasins
Creed

Just my thoughts, thanks again for the render.

 

A possibly better version of the nas one


diff vers of my sig


i thought it looked cool with the glow and other effect