~Look to the Stars

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V3:

 

good use of effects and lighting. the left almost kills it and i think it needs some text... the uhhh, im just going to say render so i dont get it wrong, is very ugly haha.

 

The left is negative space. I was trying to follow the "Rule of Thirds".

It's fine without text. My text would ruin it anyway, I'm not great with it.

Thanks for posting ^_^

 

yeah, i take photo class, and the rule of thirds explains it should follow the lines and try to place a spot of interest on one of the 4 intersecting points etc.

it just looks trab over there, i preffer a completely exciting sig.

also, i get the whole text problem

 

The stock ruins it...

 

Thanks for that great piece of C'n'C.

 

Just my true opinion. The stock is horrid.

 

Well could you give me some C'n'C? Like which version you prefer, what I could do to make it better etc?

 

Looks nice, maybe cut off the negative space a bit, and I think it would look cool with the background blurred a little bit, and add some more gradient maps, also work with the curves option to get the lighting to change.

 

Thank you lol. I played with the lighting with brightness/contrast layers but I'll test the curves.

I blurred slight parts of the background for depth. I blurred right hand side of her head, most of the negative space, and other little random spots.

Thanks ^_^

 

10/10 I like it very mutch.

 

I think it would be alright if the girl wasnt that ugly...

The negative space is alright, if you tone down the other side.
Also I would make the negative space on the right instead.

 

the woman in 1-3 sigs looks weird

 

Beautiful..The girl/guy just creeps me out..I like the negative space. It brings your eye more to the render, and I love your effects. text in the negative space would of made it better, but i understand the 'not using text' theory>.< i suck at text to =p.

 

v1 looks great. I don't like the way the girl looks but the effects and colours are very nice