Signature Rating Please

Yea, it's the girl from Transformers.

Rate (X/10) please and give me a little advice. Thanks.

 

Poor choice of a render for this style. She was in a rough-and-tumbly moment in the movie at that point, and you put her in a cutesie Background. You also might want to think about moving your text over to the left side of her, and then including something like one of Durial's old style; a Capitol B, inside of a rounded-edged square, where the B is in either a similar font as the one you used, the very same font, or an old-english style font.

To make that render work, you have to change the lighting. Give her skin a 10-20% brightness boost, and add purple highlights onto where her existing hard highlights are. Pretty much, that's only in her hair and on her left chin/right cheek area. Finally, there is not a spec of white so bright as your border in the entire image. Always use a border color that is a color from inside your signature.

8/10 Overall. A bit better than average, but still needs work. There are things I left out...

 

Thanks a lot SMI, the most helpful critism i've got from any Sythe members...ever

Thanks a lot, seriously.

 

Exactly what SMI has said. Your image looks very bland on the left hand side, so why not move the text over onto it.
The look you gave the signature compared to the render doesn't go very well. She looks scruff and beat up, rather than your signature it looks beautiful, clean and shmexy

I don't think you should even try to make the render work, if you have saved the PSD file you should just try changing the render completely. I'm no pro at Photoshop but increase the lighting around the render and it'd look fabulous.

The effect/brush you used on the left hand side of the render doesn't really appeal to me, I think it'd look good with a soft glow coming off of it rather than that. But it still looks good none the less.

I personally would give you a 8.5/10 on this, looks great, the only thing keeping you from a 10 is the render choice. Great job, wish my signatures looked like that

 

Thanks to you too Drento. Very helpful.

I've updated with a V2, and i hope you 2 can post again, is it better/worse?

Why can't everyone's critism be like that

 

Ahh, much better! I love it. Nothing much else I could say, it's definitely better than your first version of it.

That's a beautiful signature you've got there. Great job, 10/10

PS: I believe the reason behind people giving bad feedback is because they just come for post count and such, don't take the time to actually say what they think of the signature.

 

Thanks a lot, if you ever want a free signature.

[email protected], to say thanks.

Btw. Both of you it was a stock, not a render

 

Wow, thanks mate. Saves me a few hundred 'K' trying to get one made from a great artist like you.

I've added your MSN.

 

Hehe. Very nice. I love the background, but SMI is 200% right. (He's way too smart, no? yes.) About the stock, I'm sure you could've found a good pic of her looking more sexy less dirty, but other than that, the sig looks almost as sex as her. gj.

 

I agree with SMI, cute background isn't fitting for her at that moment.

6/10

 

I'll work on another one then tommorow or tonight with "a better picture". However, i think that pictures good. Thanks for all the ratings etc.

 

Megan Fox is dead sexy but like SMI said what you did with it doesn't match how she looks or what was happening in the movie. For that style you were using you should have tried a stock of her closer to the beginning where she was clean . That would go allot better with the style you used on this sig.

Edit: Forgot to rate Because its Megan Fox 8/10. If you used it on a different stock of her where she was like checking out the car or just before that when she was walkin down the road then it would go better and probably be a 9-9.5/10

 

I don't like the girl very much, but ya know, i like asian girls more ;P

V2 gmv, text is very good, it fits the sig. Try to contrast the middle of the sig a bit more. Focal point is much better than in v1, but i think u need to sharpen the render a bit more and blur a small part of the sides of the sig. Don't overblur/oversharpen it.

 

In version 2, remake it just one more time, but this time, make the border right down the middle in colors, between the 1st border, and the 2nd You should still put the letter i the bow, angled slightly, up in the top-right.

 

Took me a while to work out what you ment

OK, will edit when done.

 

9/10, i seriously love it, but im in no position to give you c/c boom, i seriously SUCK at gfx.

 

Thanks a lot, i still need more comments.

Please, how can i make it better?

 

Ah...the render kills it, I understand why you'd wan't to use her () but it's not a good picture, especially with the flowers in the backround. Maybe you should get a more relaxed picture of her and then place it. Hope I helped

 

Well, the right side is very plain, I honestly think they are pretty good but try to get more colors like you have in the middle, but the rest is very good.

 

I love the last one.
10/10 imo