First Sprite tips needed

v1


v2

any tips? and comments/criticsm

 

It's spelled Yusuke

I think there needs to be more focus. The colors are all over the place, and the sprite is not being...I dunno how to phrase it - focused on? for lack of a better term.

 

I know what you mean, and thanks for the spelling error

/spell check

 

make sprite more visible
and get better flow

 

Make it blend, make it flow.
Make the sprite be in focus and make the text be unique.
You should have an aura that represents the "mood" of the sig.

 

Needs more shadow consumption, looks a bit colorful, not good blending.

 

thanks for comments

 

need better blending, and try to use the three parts

split sig in 3 parts:
3 x horizontal
3 x vertical

then make sure you add flowing points towards those points

 

those are pretty nice

 

It's pretty good but should keep it a little bit simpler.

 

Try duplicating your sprite smudging it and then a rotating pattern of overlay color dodge.

 

you are a douche\

thanks I learned most of my sprite things from you and durial's sprite tut 9000px